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<p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="lawyer">lawyer</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="you">you</span>(用所有格<span word="your">your</span>)<span word="law">law</span> <span word="office">office</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="website">website</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span>(避免出现这种语气的词，要谦虚)<span word="one">one</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>.<span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="confident">confident</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Southwest">Southwest</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Political">Political</span> <span word="Science">Science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Law">Law</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="bachelors">bachelors</span> <span word="degrees">degrees</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="law">law</span>,</p><p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Student">Student</span> <span word="Union">Union</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="solving">solving</span> <span word="defferent">defferent</span>(拼写错误) <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="tough">tough</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span>(介词后用名词或动名词). <span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="class">class</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="send">send</span>(应该是被发送，用被动语态) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> </p>
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