考研英语作文范文批改(90)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisment">advertisment</span>(拼写错误<span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nespaper">nespaper</span>(拼写错误<span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>, <span word="and">and</span>(加主语<span word="I">I</span>)<span word="should">should</span>(应该用<span word="would">would</span>) <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="favorably">favorably</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="applicant">applicant</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="coincide">coincide</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="this">this</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="music">music</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="erhu">erhu</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span>(应该用形容词<span word="appreciated">appreciated</span>) <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="grant">grant</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="detail">detail</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="training">training</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="favorable">favorable</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> </p>
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