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<p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Industrial">Industrial</span> <span word="Designer">Designer</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="newspapers">newspapers</span>.</p><p> <span word="Therere">Therere</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="qualify">qualify</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="foremost">foremost</span>(因为信件本身比较简洁，不要用很多的连词), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Design">Design</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="University">University</span>(没有说是具体的哪一所大学，不用大写首字母), <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="faster">faster</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="others">others</span>(最好不要这样和别人进行比较，另外你不知道别的应聘者的水平). <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="last">last</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="capacity">capacity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="contact">contact</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enthusiasm">enthusiasm</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> </p>
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