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<p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interested">interested</span>(这里应该用名词<span word="interest">interest</span>) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="majored">majored</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="International">International</span> <span word="Trade">Trade</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Economics">Economics</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="complete">complete</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="attatched">attatched</span>(拼写错误). <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="parctice">parctice</span>(拼写错误) <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="take">take</span>(<span word="take">take</span>的过去分词是<span word="taken">taken</span>) <span word="charge">charge</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Union">Union</span>, <span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="lecture">lecture</span> <span word="game">game</span>(应该用复数), <span word="debate">debate</span> <span word="competion">competion</span>(拼写错误), <span word="study">study</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>.</p><p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="rapport">rapport</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="May">May</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reached">reached</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="telephone">telephone</span>.</p><p> </p>
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