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<p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="solar">solar</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="persition">persition</span>(拼写错误) <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="webcite">webcite</span>(拼写错误).</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="noticed">noticed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="have">have</span>(它的主语是<span word="someone">someone</span>某人，所以这里应该用<span word="has">has</span>) <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="eager">eager</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="majoy">majoy</span>(拼写错误) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="physics">physics</span>,(加连词<span word="and">and</span>) <span word="Ive">Ive</span> <span word="leart">leart</span>(拼写错误) <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essensial">essensial</span>(拼写错误) <span word="courses">courses</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="physics">physics</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="curiosity">curiosity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="interests">interests</span>(情态动词<span word="can">can</span>后用动词原形) <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="including">including</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reneable">reneable</span>(拼写错误) <span word="energy">energy</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="persiton">persiton</span> (拼写错误)<span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="knowleage">knowleage</span>(拼写错误) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span>.</p><p> <span word="Ill">Ill</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="appriciate">appriciate</span>(拼写错误，这里需要一个形容词，<span word="appreciated">appreciated</span>) <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>. <span word="thank">thank</span>(<span word="t">t</span>大写)<span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="letter">letter</span>(避免重复，改成<span word="reply">reply</span>).<span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="day">day</span>(这一部分去掉).</p><p> </p>
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