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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.(另起一段)<span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="majoring">majoring</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Design">Design</span> <span word="Studies">Studies</span>.</p><p> <span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="futher">futher</span>(拼写错误) <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fashion">fashion</span> <span word="designing">designing</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="be">be</span>(这个搭配不正确，可以直接用<span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span>) <span word="hopeful">hopeful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="Fashions">Fashions</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span>.</p><p> </p>
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