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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>(拼写错误) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tour">tour</span> <span word="guide">guide</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="on">on</span>(改成<span word="is">is</span>，否则句子没有谓语动词)<span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>.</p><p> <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tour">tour</span> <span word="guide">guide</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="person">person</span>. <span word="Sencondly">Sencondly</span>(拼写错误), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span>(改成<span word="can">can</span>，动词是后面的<span word="establish">establish</span>)<span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="rapport">rapport</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="ages">ages</span>. <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="tour">tour</span> <span word="guide">guide</span>,(加连词) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="best">best</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="please">please</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="at">at</span> 87654321.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p> </p>
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