考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改52
<p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="resident">resident</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="hospital">hospital</span>. 【<span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="colleages">colleages</span>(拼写错误). <span word="That">That</span> <span word="well">well</span>(<span word="will">will</span>) <span word="be">be</span> <span word="unforgetten">unforgetten</span>(拼写错误)<span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="life">life</span>.简单的说一下即可，毕竟人家连你的简历都没有看到还不能决定录不录用你】 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="detail">detail</span>(用第三人称单数<span word="details">details</span>，它的主语是<span word="resume">resume</span>) <span word="my">my</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="da">da</span>(去掉)<span word="have">have</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="solid">solid</span> <span word="theoretical">theoretical</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Medical">Medical</span> <span word="Collage">Collage</span>(不用大写，没有说明是哪个具体的学校) <span word="for">for</span> 5 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span>(<span word="an">an</span>) <span word="intern">intern</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Mercy">Mercy</span> <span word="West">West</span> <span word="Hospital">Hospital</span> <span word="for">for</span> 7 <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="During">During</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="accumulated">accumulated</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="a">a</span>(去掉，后面的<span word="skills">skills</span>用的复数) <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="clinical">clinical</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="succeed">succeed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="career">career</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="perfece">perfece</span>(拼写错误)<span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="teamworker">teamworker</span>(这不是一个词)<span word="that">that</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="proved">proved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interns">interns</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="rapport">rapport</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="patient">patient</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="ages">ages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earlist">earlist</span>(拼写错误)<span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="hospital">hospital</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：5-6分太长。其实中间的内容很简单，1你的学历;2你的经历;3你的个人秉性。简单扼要的说明就可以了。</p>
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