考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改65
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Cover">Cover</span> <span word="Letter">Letter</span></p><p> <span word="October">October</span> 19,2011</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chengdu">Chengdu</span> <span word="Daily">Daily</span> <span word="Paper">Paper</span> <span word="yesterday">yesterday</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="center">center</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="shall">shall</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="kindly">kindly</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prospect">prospect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, Having seen your job offer advertised in Chengdu Daily Paper yesterday, I would like to apply for the position and I hope I might be able to interview with your training center(这里想要表达什么?). Im a Chemistry teacher at a middle school, (加连词and)I received M.A. degree of Chemical Biology last year. The job described in your newspaper seems suited to my background, and Im confident that I would be able to perform the job to your satisfaction. I have enclosed my resume and I would be most obliged if you would give me the chance to interview your firm. I shall be very grateful if you will kindly let me know as soon as possible the prospect of success of my application. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 点评：5-6分不知道你应聘的是什么职业，第二段没有介绍太多实质性的内容，而且最后一句的后半句可以去掉。</p>
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