考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改55
<p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="excited">excited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="school">school</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="eager">eager</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="join">join</span> <span word="you">you</span> .</p><p><span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="YunNan">YunNan</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="majoring">majoring</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="English">English</span>,<span word="My">My</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="position">position</span> .<span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> ,<span word="all">all</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> ,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="laid">laid</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="foundation">foundation</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="work">work</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="passed">passed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="eight">eight</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="examination">examination</span>,<span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>.<span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="importantly">importantly</span>,<span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="career">career</span>.</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> .</p><p><span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p><span word="LiMing">LiMing</span></p><p>考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p><span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="excited">excited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span>(<span word="am">am</span>，用现在时) <span word="really">really</span> <span word="eager">eager</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="join">join</span> <span word="you">you</span> . <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="YunNan">YunNan</span>(<span word="Yunnan">Yunnan</span>) <span word="University">University</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="majoring">majoring</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="English">English</span>, <span word="My">My</span>(<span word="my">my</span>) <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="position">position</span> .<span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> , <span word="which">which</span> <span word="laid">laid</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="foundation">foundation</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="passed">passed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="eight">eight</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="examination">examination</span>(专八?要写正确), <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>. <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="importantly">importantly</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="English">English</span>(加<span word="teacher">teacher</span>) <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="career">career</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> . <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span> 点评：7分写的还可以，要注意细节性的问题。第二段表达要简明扼要，可以多谢几个方面，例如经验和性格。但一定要简洁。</p>
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