考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改60
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="Science">Science</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="administrator">administrator</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="qualitied">qualitied</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>.<span word="First">First</span>,<span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resum">resum</span>,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>.<span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>,<span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualitifications">qualitifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>,<span word="my">my</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="spirt">spirt</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="administrator">administrator</span>.</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relevance">relevance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>.</p><p> <span word="yours">yours</span> <span word="truly">truly</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madom">Madom</span>(拼写错误),</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="qualitied">qualitied</span>(拼写错误) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resum">resum</span>(拼写错误), <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualitifications">qualitifications</span>(拼写错误) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span>(加不定冠词<span word="a">a</span>) <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="spirt">spirt</span>(拼写错误) <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="administrator">administrator</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relevance">relevance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>(这一部分可以去掉，因为<span word="interview">interview</span>基本上会涉及这些内容). <span word="yours">yours</span>(<span word="Yours">Yours</span>)<span word="truly">truly</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：6分</p>
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