考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改32
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="literature">literature</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Lanzhou">Lanzhou</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writting">writting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="post">post</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span></p><p> <span word="LI">LI</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="madom">madom</span>(<span word="madam">madam</span>拼写错误，用大写<span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="literature">literature</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Lanzhou">Lanzhou</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writting">writting</span>(拼写错误 <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="post">post</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>. <span word="Secendly">Secendly</span>(拼写错误), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="cultivated">cultivated</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="school">school</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="difficulty">difficulty</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="confronted">confronted</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="nearer">nearer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="grant">grant</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relevance">relevance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="background">background</span>, <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>(加逗号) <span word="LI">LI</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：6分建议在第一段写明你申请的职位，从而让第二段的几条信息更有针对性。结尾处还应该有等待您的回复之类的一句话。<span word="So">So</span> <span word="that">that</span>后的可以去掉。</p>
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