考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改41
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>，</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="yesterdays">yesterdays</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>, <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="post">post</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="applicant">applicant</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="ABC">ABC</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="majoring">majoring</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Secretary">Secretary</span>. <span word="During">During</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="awarded">awarded</span> <span word="scholarship">scholarship</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="attained">attained</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fair">fair</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="together">together</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="background">background</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>.</p><p> <span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reference">reference</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="shall">shall</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="pleased">pleased</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="truly">truly</span>，</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>，In reply to(用介词to) your advertisement in yesterdays newspaper, Im writing this letter to apply for the post of a secretary in your company. I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position.I graduated from ABC University majoring in Secretary. During my academic years, I have shown excellent performance and have been awarded scholarship each year. In addition, I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in my previous work as a secretary. It seems to me that my working experience, together with my education background, has given me an ideal preparation to assume the role of a secretary in a firm like yours.Enclosed is my resume for your reference, and I shall be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience. 【Yours truly， Li Ming】(落款部分位于信件的右下角) 点评：9分写的很好。语言简洁得体。</p>
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