考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改54
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="madam">madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="Notiong">Notiong</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="softerware">softerware</span> <span word="designers">designers</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span>, <span word="called">called</span> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>, <span word="am">am</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="granduated">granduated</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="NanChang">NanChang</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follow">follow</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="foremost">foremost</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Softerware">Softerware</span> <span word="Engineering">Engineering</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="four">four</span>-<span word="year">year</span>-<span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="softerware">softerware</span> <span word="designing">designing</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="knowledges">knowledges</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>,<span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="joined">joined</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="program">program</span>, <span word="named">named</span> <span word="SFEE">SFEE</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="newman">newman</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="can">can</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="softerware">softerware</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="myslef">myslef</span>. <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="partime">partime</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="network">network</span> <span word="moderator">moderator</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="universitys">universitys</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="network">network</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="plenty">plenty</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="network">network</span> <span word="maintainance">maintainance</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="letter">letter</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="files">files</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="response">response</span>.</p><p> <span word="yours">yours</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="madam">madam</span>,I, called Li Ming, am an(a)granduated(拼写错误) of NanChang(Nanjing) University. I am sure I am just the man your company is looking for. There are three reasons as follow. The first and foremost, I am major in Softerware(拼写错误)Engineering. After four-year-learning(four-year learning) of softerware(拼写错误) designing, I can meet all of the knowledges(拼写错误) and abilities which this position needs. Second, When(w小写) I was a senior, I joined a software program, named SFEE, with my teacher. So I, who is not a newman(new man分开写) any more, can solve a lot of problems during developing a softerware(拼写错误) by myslef(拼写错误). the last but not least, I took a partime(part-time)job as a network moderator of my universitys campus network for half a year, which gives me plenty of experience in network maintainance(拼写错误). It is very nice of you to read my letter, and all the details can be see(应该用过去分词seen) from the enclosed files. I look forward to your response.yours(Yours一般后加sincerely/truly等词),</p>
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