考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改64
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>,<span word="my">my</span> <span word="majoy">majoy</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Art">Art</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Calligraphy">Calligraphy</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="awarded">awarded</span> <span word="scholarship">scholarship</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="university">university</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>,<span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="compositions">compositions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="advert">advert</span> <span word="firms">firms</span>,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Art">Art</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Calligraphy">Calligraphy</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Shanxi">Shanxi</span> <span word="Normal">Normal</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="designer">designer</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span>(用介词<span word="on">on</span>) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="about">about</span>(用<span word="that">that</span>，后面接的是句子) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="majoy">majoy</span>(拼写错误) <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Art">Art</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Calligraphy">Calligraphy</span>, <span word="and">and</span>(加主语<span word="I">I</span>，前边一句话的主语是<span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span>) <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="awarded">awarded</span> <span word="scholarship">scholarship</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span>(用现在时<span word="have">have</span>) <span word="some">some</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, (加<span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span>)<span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="compositions">compositions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="advert">advert</span> <span word="firms">firms</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="refer">refer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="attached">attached</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span>(用第三人称单数) <span word="my">my</span> <span word="information">information</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="favorable">favorable</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：6分错误有点多，另外需要多看些模板和满分作文来提升表达能力和思路。</p><p> </p>
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