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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改50

<p>  <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="Language">Language</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Literature">Literature</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span>.</p><p>  <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>.<span word="First">First</span>,<span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="futher">futher</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>.<span word="Second">Second</span>,<span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>,<span word="my">my</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="candidated">candidated</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>.<span word="Third">Third</span>,<span word="my">my</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="music">music</span>.</p><p>  <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="grant">grant</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relevance">relevance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span>.</p><p>  <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p>  <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p>  考研英语作文批改点评如下:</p><p>  <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p>  <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="Language">Language</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Literature">Literature</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 【<span word="First">First</span>, <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="futher">futher</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>. 】(这一部分放到本段最后)<span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="candidated">candidated</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>. <span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="music">music</span>.(这与求职没有直接的关系) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="grant">grant</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relevance">relevance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评:5分第二段写的不充分,出去与说明自己无关的话,只有一句话是在推销自己。</p>
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