考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改49
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="Administration">Administration</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="accounting">accounting</span> <span word="applicant">applicant</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="prestigious">prestigious</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="net">net</span>.</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="sheet">sheet</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="varied">varied</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bookstore">bookstore</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="market">market</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="accounts">accounts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cooperate">cooperate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span>. <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="meantime">meantime</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="regarding">regarding</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="Administration">Administration</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="accounting">accounting</span> <span word="applicant">applicant</span>(这是一个职业吗) <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="prestigious">prestigious</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="net">net</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="You">You</span>(<span word="y">y</span>小写) <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="sheet">sheet</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="varied">varied</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bookstore">bookstore</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="market">market</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="accounts">accounts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cooperate">cooperate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span>. <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>.(这一句话跟申请职位没有什么太大的关系) <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="meantime">meantime</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="regarding">regarding</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：5-6分第二段写的不是很充分。可以说出你的几方面适合这个工作的地方，然后再说随心附上简历。</p>
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