考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改63
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>：</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mine">mine</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="couldnt">couldnt</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="pretty">pretty</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2004 <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="English">English</span>-<span word="majored">majored</span> <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> 2 <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="during">during</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="accumulated">accumulated</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dealing">dealing</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="foreigners">foreigners</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fulfill">fulfill</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="grante">grante</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>(因为不知道是男士还是女士，所以用<span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>)：(英语中用逗号)</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mine">mine</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="couldnt">couldnt</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="pretty">pretty</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="form">form</span>(<span word="from">from</span>) <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2004 <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="English">English</span>-<span word="majored">majored</span> <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> 2 <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="during">during</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="accumulated">accumulated</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dealing">dealing</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span>(加介词<span word="with">with</span>) <span word="foreigners">foreigners</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fulfill">fulfill</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p>
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