考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改40
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="translator">translator</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="favorably">favorably</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Masters">Masters</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Fudan">Fudan</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2009. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="translator">translator</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="for">for</span> 2 <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="transfer">transfer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="familiar">familiar</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="translating">translating</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="certificate">certificate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="translating">translating</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="handled">handled</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="inviting">inviting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clients">clients</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="USA">USA</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="Expo">Expo</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="shall">shall</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="pleased">pleased</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="furnish">furnish</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="withing">withing</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="moment">moment</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="telephone">telephone</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="is">is</span>: 666-666.</p><p> <span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="receiving">receiving</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="favorable">favorable</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="translator">translator</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="favorably">favorably</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Masters">Masters</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Fudan">Fudan</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2009. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="translator">translator</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="for">for</span> 2 <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="transfer">transfer</span>(应该用过去时) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="familiar">familiar</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="translating">translating</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="certificate">certificate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="translating">translating</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="handled">handled</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="inviting">inviting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clients">clients</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="USA">USA</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="Expo">Expo</span>(最好不要用简写). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="shall">shall</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="pleased">pleased</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="furnish">furnish</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="withing">withing</span>(<span word="with">with</span>?) <span word="further">further</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="moment">moment</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="telephone">telephone</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="is">is</span>: 666-666. <span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="receiving">receiving</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="favorable">favorable</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.(这一句话可以并在最后一段) 【<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>】(落款部分写在右下角) 点评：8-9分写的很不错。最后一段适当简练一些。</p>
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