考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改36
<p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Ling">Ling</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="responding">responding</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span>(改成<span word="on">on</span>) <span word="June">June</span> 17<span word="th">th</span>, 2011, <span word="the">the</span>(改成<span word="in">in</span>) <span word="China">China</span> <span word="daily">daily</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nutritionist">nutritionist</span> .<span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="prompts">prompts</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="closely">closely</span> <span word="parallel">parallel</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="form">form</span>(<span word="from">from</span>)<span word="Chemistry">Chemistry</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Ji">Ji</span> <span word="Lin">Lin</span>(<span word="Jilin">Jilin</span>) <span word="University">University</span> .<span word="My">My</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Pharmaceutical">Pharmaceutical</span> <span word="Program">Program</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nutritionist">nutritionist</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="for">for</span> 2 <span word="years">years</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="rapport">rapport</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="ages">ages</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cooperative">cooperative</span> <span word="partners">partners</span>.(去掉，与上一句语义重复) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="grant">grant</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relevance">relevance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="ang">ang</span>(<span word="and">and</span>?) <span word="training">training</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="future">future</span>. 【<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Ling">Ling</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>】(落款部分位于右下角) 点评：6-7分语言要简洁，言简意赅。</p><p> </p>
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