考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改30
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word="is">is</span> 8293655. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Tanjin">Tanjin</span>(<span word="Tianjin">Tianjin</span>) <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="legal">legal</span> <span word="adviser">adviser</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="specified">specified</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="temporary">temporary</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="leisure">leisure</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Meanwhile">Meanwhile</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="passed">passed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="judicial">judicial</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="obtained">obtained</span> <span word="lawyer">lawyer</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="certificate">certificate</span> <span word="in">in</span>(去掉) <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="attained">attained</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fair">fair</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> 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<span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：8-9分写的很好，几乎没有错误，思路、格式也没有问题，争取向满分作文冲刺!</p>
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