考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改48
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="wishes">wishes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>.</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="grant">grant</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="wishes">wishes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="librarian">librarian</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="library">library</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="absoluted">absoluted</span>(拼写错误) <span word="much">much</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span>(这里应该用<span word="does">does</span>) <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="kindful">kindful</span>(拼写错误) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hobby">hobby</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="singing">singing</span>.(与申请工作没有关系) <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="grant">grant</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>， <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：5-6分第一段写明你要申请的职位。然后分几条说明自己。要写对你申请工作最有帮助的几条内容。</p><p> </p>
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