考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改51
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writting">writting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="website">website</span> <span word="proximately">proximately</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="doctor">doctor</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="consoderation">consoderation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span> . <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forword">forword</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>,</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span> ,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writting">writting</span>(拼写错误，<span word="writing">writing</span>) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="website">website</span> <span word="proximately">proximately</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="doctor">doctor</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span>(这里表达的不好). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span>(<span word="believe">believe</span>是相信，<span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span>是信任) <span word="that">that</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写) <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="female">female</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Medical">Medical</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写) <span word="am">am</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="medically">medically</span>(这里用形容词) <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="patience">patience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="inherent">inherent</span> <span word="charavter">charavter</span>(拼写错误)<span word="of">of</span> <span word="female">female</span>. <span word="Particularly">Particularly</span>, <span word="i">i</span>(大写) <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chlidren">chlidren</span>(拼写错误)<span word="hospital">hospital</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写) <span word="graduated">graduated</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写) <span word="am">am</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span>. <span word="Maybe">Maybe</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>(<span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>?) <span word="you">you</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写) <span word="quit">quit</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hospital">hospital</span>. 【<span word="The">The</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span> <span word="shool">shool</span>(拼写错误), <span word="the">the</span> <span word="doctor">doctor</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hospital">hospital</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tired">tired</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写) <span word="take">take</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="chlidren">chlidren</span>(拼写错误),】(这个观点会让人认为也许你也因为累而辞去这份工作) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>(用所有格<span word="your">your</span>) <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="consoderation">consoderation</span>(拼写错误)<span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forword">forword</span>(拼写错误)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>,(结尾用句号) <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> (落款位于右下角，两行内容不用离这么远) 点评：4-5分要简洁扼要的写出有助于你得到这份工作的内容。</p>
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