考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改27
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="comging">comging</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="confident">confident</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="certificated">certificated</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Bachelor">Bachelor</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="manegement">manegement</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="admistration">admistration</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="for">for</span> 10 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="familiar">familiar</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="favor">favor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="around">around</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="investigation">investigation</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="preference">preference</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="advertisting">advertisting</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thereafter">thereafter</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="satisfied">satisfied</span> <span word="selling">selling</span> <span word="prospect">prospect</span>.</p><p> <span word="Best">Best</span> <span word="Wishes">Wishes</span></p><p> <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>/<span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="comging">comging</span>(拼写错误) <span word="product">product</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="to">to</span>(一般用<span word="for">for</span>，<span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span>) <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="confident">confident</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="period">period</span>(这里表达的不太好，建议将你的工作经验拿出来单独写一句话). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="certificated">certificated</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Bachelor">Bachelor</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="manegement">manegement</span>(拼写错误，<span word="management">management</span>) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="admistration">admistration</span>(拼写错误，<span word="administration">administration</span>). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="for">for</span> 10 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="familiar">familiar</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="favor">favor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="around">around</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="investigation">investigation</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span>(<span word="consumers">consumers</span>) <span word="preference">preference</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="advertisting">advertisting</span>(拼写错误，<span word="advertising">advertising</span>) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thereafter">thereafter</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="satisfied">satisfied</span> <span word="selling">selling</span> <span word="prospect">prospect</span>. <span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>. <span word="Best">Best</span> <span word="Wishes">Wishes</span> <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span> (一般落款用<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>/<span word="truly">truly</span>，下一行<span word="LiMing">LiMing</span>的形式，位于右下角) 点评：6-7分拼写错误有点多，另外格式上不要失分，否则太可惜。</p>
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