考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改26
<p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span></p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="English">English</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="tearching">tearching</span>(拼写错误<span word="teaching">teaching</span>)<span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="decide">decide</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="command">command</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span>(应该用<span word="an">an</span>)<span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="speak">speak</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="fluently">fluently</span>. <span word="Above">Above</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="appreciation">appreciation</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>(加逗号) <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：7-8分写的不错，错误比较少。第一段可以再简洁一些，然后第二段适当的加一两句话。</p><p> </p>
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