考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改39
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Manager">Manager</span>,</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="passion">passion</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Technical">Technical</span> <span word="Director">Director</span>.</p><p> <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="giant">giant</span> <span word="challenge">challenge</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follow">follow</span>.<span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="six">six</span>_<span word="year">year</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Assistant">Assistant</span> <span word="Technical">Technical</span> <span word="Director">Director</span></p><p> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="company">company</span>,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>,<span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="specialization">specialization</span> <span word="college">college</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="certifications">certifications</span>.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>,<span word="pushing">pushing</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Technical">Technical</span> <span word="Director">Director</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="attached">attached</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="below">below</span>,<span word="please">please</span> <span word="read">read</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="appreciated">appreciated</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>.<span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span>!</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="faithfully">faithfully</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>.</p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Manager">Manager</span>,</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="passion">passion</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span>(改成<span word="for">for</span>，<span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span>) <span word="Technical">Technical</span> <span word="Director">Director</span>.<span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="giant">giant</span> <span word="challenge">challenge</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follow">follow</span>. <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="six">six</span>_<span word="year">year</span>(<span word="six">six</span>-<span word="year">year</span>) <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Assistant">Assistant</span> <span word="Technical">Technical</span> <span word="Director">Director</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="company">company</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>.<span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="specialization">specialization</span> <span word="college">college</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="certifications">certifications</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>, <span word="pushing">pushing</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="want">want</span>(去掉，<span word="pushing">pushing</span>可以表达此意)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span>(应该用<span word="a">a</span>) <span word="Technical">Technical</span> <span word="Director">Director</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="attached">attached</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="as">as</span>(去掉)<span word="below">below</span>, <span word="please">please</span> <span word="read">read</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="appreciated">appreciated</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>. <span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.<span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span>!(这一部分去掉) <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="faithfully">faithfully</span>,</p>
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