考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改38
<p> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span></p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>】(落款部分位于右下角)</p><p> 点评：5-6分</p><p> 虽然<span word="waitress">waitress</span>是一个很普通的职业，但是这封求职信并不是很好写，第二段中你前两个方面的内容比较空洞，只是大概的说了一下有意愿有经验，所以要注意选材。</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>(加逗号) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="to">to</span>(一般用<span word="in">in</span>， <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span>)<span word="your">your</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="waitress">waitress</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="restaurant">restaurant</span>(拼写错误). <span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="worke">worke</span>(拼写错误)<span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="others">others</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span>. <span word="No">No</span>(应该是<span word="Not">Not</span>)<span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="waitress">waitress</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rapport">rapport</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="ages">ages</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="future">future</span>. 【<span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>(一般用<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，注意最后有逗号)</p><p> </p>
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