考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改35
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="responding">responding</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="October">October</span> 10,2011,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="Daily">Daily</span> ,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editor">editor</span>.<span word="It">It</span> <span word="prompts">prompts</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="closely">closely</span> <span word="parallel">parallel</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="reviewing">reviewing</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="additional">additional</span> <span word="imformation">imformation</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="require">require</span>,<span word="please">please</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="me">me</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="welcome">welcome</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="faithfully">faithfully</span>,</p><p> <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>:(英文信件中，这里用逗号) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="responding">responding</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="October">October</span> 10,2011,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="Daily">Daily</span>(这一部分比较乱) ,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editor">editor</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="prompts">prompts</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="closely">closely</span> <span word="parallel">parallel</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="graduating">graduating</span>(改成<span word="graduate">graduate</span>，前边有<span word="will">will</span>) <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Graduate">Graduate</span> <span word="School">School</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Tsinghua">Tsinghua</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="degree">degree</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graphic">graphic</span> <span word="designer">designer</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="for">for</span> 2 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="job">job</span>(<span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="job">job</span>). <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="editing">editing</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="CCTV">CCTV</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="competent">competent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="reviewing">reviewing</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="additional">additional</span> <span word="imformation">imformation</span>(拼写错误)<span word="you">you</span> <span word="require">require</span>, <span word="please">please</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="welcome">welcome</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>. 【<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="faithfully">faithfully</span>, <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span>】(落款部分位于右下方) 点评：6-7分写的还是不错的，注意这几个细节和格式上的错误。</p>
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