考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改29
<p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerly">sincerly</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span>(应该用<span word="an">an</span>) <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Human">Human</span> <span word="Resources">Resources</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="ABC">ABC</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="HR">HR</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="issued">issued</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="homepage">homepage</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="qualify">qualify</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="acheived">acheived</span>(拼写错误，<span word="achieved">achieved</span>) <span word="satisfactory">satisfactory</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="awarded">awarded</span> <span word="scholarships">scholarships</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="times">times</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Human">Human</span>(既然后面的单词都没有大写首字母，这里也不要大写了) <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="division">division</span> <span word="examination">examination</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="HR">HR</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="D">D</span> <span word="company">company</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="handle">handle</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibilities">responsibilities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="Lastly">Lastly</span>, <span word="compared">compared</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="candidates">candidates</span>(不要跟别人比较，因为你不了解别的应聘者的情况) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="speak">speak</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="Japanese">Japanese</span> <span word="fluently">fluently</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yourssincerely">Yourssincerely</span>(<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>),</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span>(不用空格) <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：7-8分写的不错，有些地方最好能简化一点。</p><p> </p>
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