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<p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>:(英语中有逗号) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Nanjing">Nanjing</span> <span word="Normal">Normal</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="chinese">chinese</span>(<span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>) <span word="professional">professional</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="number">number</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="compang">compang</span>(拼写错误) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="summer">summer</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="basketball">basketball</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="precious">precious</span> <span word="appreciation">appreciation</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="oppotrunity">oppotrunity</span>(拼写错误) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>. <span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="forwad">forwad</span>(拼写错误) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：6分中间一段显得有点过于简洁，可以再加一条你的学习对工作的帮助等信息。或是将最重要的一条展开一两句来说明。注意拼写。</p><p> </p>
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