考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改37
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="qualify">qualify</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="well">well</span>.<span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>,<span word="what">what</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span></p><p> <span word="studied">studied</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="accordance">accordance</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rules">rules</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="offered">offered</span>.<span word="On">On</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="ready">ready</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cope">cope</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span></p><p> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="parttime">parttime</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="IBM">IBM</span>.<span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="reckon">reckon</span></p><p> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="assist">assist</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="adapt">adapt</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span>.<span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>,</p><p> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="informationis">informationis</span> <span word="presented">presented</span>.</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span>,<span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span></p><p> <span word="interviewed">interviewed</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="myself">myself</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="Science">Science</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Peking">Peking</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="favour">favour</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="engineer">engineer</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span>(用<span word="on">on</span>) <span word="your">your</span> <span word="website">website</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="qualify">qualify</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="studied">studied</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="accordance">accordance</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rules">rules</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="offered">offered</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="ready">ready</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cope">cope</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="parttime">parttime</span>(<span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span>) <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="IBM">IBM</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="reckon">reckon</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="assist">assist</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="adapt">adapt</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="of">of</span>(去掉，<span word="detail">detail</span>是个及物动词)<span word="my">my</span> <span word="informationis">informationis</span>(拼写错误)<span word="presented">presented</span>(这个词用在这里想要表达什么呢?现在的信息应该是<span word="present">present</span> <span word="information">information</span>).<span word="Finally">Finally</span>,(这个词建议去掉) <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="interviewed">interviewed</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="myself">myself</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p>
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