考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改28
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<span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="Tom">Tom</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="vacancy">vacancy</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span>, <span word="and">and</span> (建议加<span word="I">I</span>)<span word="am">am</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="confident">confident</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="handle">handle</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="command">command</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> (加<span word="I">I</span>)<span word="can">can</span> <span word="speak">speak</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="fluently">fluently</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="gained">gained</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ability">ability</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="convinced">convinced</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="satisfactory">satisfactory</span> <span word="contribution">contribution</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> (加定冠词<span word="the">the</span>)<span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span>(拼写错误，<span word="forward">forward</span>) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：6分第二段的第二部分内容给人感觉很空旷，要让你的内容更加充实。</p>
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