考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改5
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>. <span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>(<span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>，注意<span word="Internet">Internet</span>首字母大写). <span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="working">working</span>(这里应该用<span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> 的形式) <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="listening">listening</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="speaking">speaking</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>.(建议将这一句话去掉，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="future">future</span>.有后边的这句话就够了) <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="future">future</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>(这一部分放在右下角) 点评：5-6分第二段稍显不充分，可以再加一两句话。</p>
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