考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改23
<p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="truly">truly</span>,(格式右下角左对齐)</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 老师辛苦您了，这是我备战考研第一次写作文....不会写太痛苦了，请教老师一个问题，考研作文老师没有偏好齐头式或者空两行的格式吧，再次感谢老师，老师我加上那几个字，署名才能在右下角，要不格式就不对了，我怎么都弄不好，只能弄成那样了</p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="Economist">Economist</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="months">months</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>(时间太长，两个月之前的招聘广告很有可能已经过期). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="worked">worked</span>(这里不用完成时，改成<span word="working">working</span>) <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="majority">majority</span>(这个词是大多数的意思，改成<span word="major">major</span>) <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span>(去掉) <span word="News">News</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="personally">personally</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="fit">fit</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="finance">finance</span> <span word="company">company</span>,(加连词<span word="and">and</span>) <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="acquired">acquired</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="capability">capability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="form">form</span>(<span word="from">from</span>) <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="at">at</span> 98765 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="truly">truly</span>,(格式右下角左对齐) <span word="Li">Li</span>(不用空格) <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：6分第二段的内容，去掉第一句的客套话后实际内容很少，可以把你的学历和经验分开写。另外可以写一写你的<span word="personality">personality</span>等内容。</p>
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