考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改8
<p> <span word="Yous">Yous</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="youngman">youngman</span>(<span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span>分开写) <span word="who">who</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>(应该用所有格<span word="your">your</span>) <span word="website">website</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="editor">editor</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="equal">equal</span> <span word="to">to</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sociaty">sociaty</span>(拼写错误<span word="society">society</span>) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="couples">couples</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="months">months</span>.(表达比较中式化) <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span>(应该是<span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="have">have</span>) <span word="that">that</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="however">however</span>,(去掉，前边已经有<span word="although">although</span>，英语中<span word="although">although</span>不与<span word="but">but</span>、<span word="however">however</span>等连用，<span word="because">because</span>不与<span word="so">so</span>连用)<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="intern">intern</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span>(去掉，直接用<span word="half">half</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span>就可以了) <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="knew">knew</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>-<span word="working">working</span> <span word="man">man</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="cherish">cherish</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="appreciation">appreciation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>. <span word="Yous">Yous</span>(<span word="Yours">Yours</span>) <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：5-6分主要问题是表达上比较中式化，同时要注意单词、词组的使用问题。</p><p> </p>
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