考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改22
<p> <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="noticed">noticed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="todays">todays</span> <span word="BTV">BTV</span> <span word="Channel">Channel</span> 1,<span word="My">My</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="prompted">prompted</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="review">review</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="handle">handle</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibilities">responsibilities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="presently">presently</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="standing">standing</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="University">University</span>.<span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="satisfactory">satisfactory</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="awarded">awarded</span> <span word="scholarships">scholarships</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="times">times</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="edit">edit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="Book">Book</span> <span word="Company">Company</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="further">further</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="handle">handle</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibilities">responsibilities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="presently">presently</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="standing">standing</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="in">in</span>(<span word="i">i</span>大写) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="satisfactory">satisfactory</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="awarded">awarded</span> <span word="scholarships">scholarships</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="times">times</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="edit">edit</span>(<span word="edit">edit</span>是个动词，这里需要名词<span word="editor">editor</span>) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="Book">Book</span> <span word="Company">Company</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="further">further</span>. <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>(应该位于右下方) 点评：7-8分写的很不错，语言简练，注意格式，加油! <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="noticed">noticed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="todays">todays</span> <span word="BTV">BTV</span> <span word="Channel">Channel</span> 1, <span word="My">My</span>(<span word="m">m</span>小写)<span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="prompted">prompted</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="review">review</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p>
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