考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改16
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sandong">sandong</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="reding">reding</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="message">message</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recruiting">recruiting</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="engineers">engineers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="community">community</span> .</p><p> <span word="Tank">Tank</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="appreciation">appreciation</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="Ling">Ling</span> <span word="ming">ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span>(空格)<span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Modam">Modam</span>(拼写错误，<span word="Madam">Madam</span>)(加逗号)</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sandong">sandong</span>(<span word="Shandong">Shandong</span>) <span word="University">University</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>(应该用完成时，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="learnt">learnt</span>) <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="science">science</span>(加<span word="for">for</span>) <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="reding">reding</span>(改成<span word="read">read</span>，应该是读完才写信的) <span word="this">this</span> <span word="message">message</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="your">your</span>(改成<span word="youre">youre</span>) <span word="recruiting">recruiting</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="engineers">engineers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="community">community</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="whose">whose</span>(改成<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span>，否则这不是一个完整的句子) <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span>(加<span word="I">I</span>) <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="And">And</span>, <span word="last">last</span> <span word="summer">summer</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="into">into</span>(改成<span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="in">in</span>) <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span>(应该用<span word="an">an</span>)<span word="engineer">engineer</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="belief">belief</span>(<span word="have">have</span> <span word="belief">belief</span>或者是<span word="believe">believe</span>) <span word="this">this</span> <span word="professinal">professinal</span>(拼写错误<span word="professional">professional</span>)<span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="adapt">adapt</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="enterprise">enterprise</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="worker">worker</span>. <span word="You">You</span>(应该用所有格<span word="your">your</span>) <span word="corporation">corporation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leader">leader</span>(前边是<span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span>结构，这里应该用复数形式) <span word="of">of</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="science">science</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="assure">assure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="must">must</span>(去掉一个) <span word="be">be</span> <span word="unforgetable">unforgetable</span>(拼写错误，<span word="unforgettable">unforgettable</span>是令人难忘的，你不能说是我将令人难忘的) <span word="throught">throught</span>(拼写错误<span word="through">through</span>) <span word="my">my</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Tank">Tank</span>(<span word="thanks">thanks</span>) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>(<span word="your">your</span>) <span word="time">time</span> <span word="And">And</span>(<span word="and">and</span>，<span word="a">a</span>小写) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="appreciation">appreciation</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="Ling">Ling</span> <span word="ming">ming</span>(<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，下一行<span word="LiMing">LiMing</span>，落款谓语右下角) 点评：4-5分主要问题是语法错误和拼写错误比较多。需要多背单词多积累词语的用法，同时需要学习一下句式方面的语法知识。</p>
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