考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改6
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word="staff">staff</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span>(因为不知道将会是男士还是女士，所以应该用<span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="Languageand">Languageand</span> <span word="Literature">Literature</span>(<span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="Language">Language</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Literature">Literature</span> <span word="Department">Department</span>)<span word="in">in</span> <span word="Nangjing">Nangjing</span>(<span word="Nanjing">Nanjing</span>) <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="resently">resently</span>(拼写错误，<span word="recently">recently</span>) <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="falling">falling</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strengthen">strengthen</span>(这里需要一个名词<span word="strength">strength</span>) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="firstly">firstly</span>(<span word="f">f</span>大写), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span>(加补丁冠词<span word="a">a</span>) <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span 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word="or">or</span> <span word="call">call</span> 1234567 <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inform">inform</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="having">having</span>(<span word="will">will</span>后用动词原形) <span word="been">been</span> <span word="invited">invited</span> .<span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="forword">forword</span>(拼写错误，<span word="forward">forward</span>) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>(一般用<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，还是随大流比较好), <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 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