考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改10
<p> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enquire">enquire</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="placement">placement</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="a">a</span>(两个冠词不要同时用)<span word="sofeware">sofeware</span>(拼写错误，<span word="software">software</span>) <span word="engineer">engineer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>.(这不是一句完整的话，要并入前一句话中) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="finish">finish</span>(改成<span word="finished">finished</span>，用过去分词，不用被动语态) <span word="study">study</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="hubei">hubei</span> <span word="university">university</span>(学校名称属特有名次，首字母大写) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pursued">pursued</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写)<span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="leader">leader</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="campany">campany</span>(拼写错误，<span word="company">company</span>), <span word="salary">salary</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="overtime">overtime</span>, <span word="i">i</span>(大写)<span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="tied">tied</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写) <span word="have">have</span> <span word="decide">decide</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="quit">quit</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="therefore">therefore</span>(<span word="t">t</span>大写), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="considerderation">considerderation</span>(拼写错误，<span word="consideration">consideration</span>) <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="application">application</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="your">your</span>(<span word="Yours">Yours</span>)<span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：4-5分细节性错误和小错误比较多。第二段内容不太符合要求，要分几条写你哪里适合这项工作。注意大小写的问题。</p><p> </p>
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