考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改19
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="designer">designer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="posted">posted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="Daily">Daily</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="unforgettable">unforgettable</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="cover">cover</span> <span word="letters">letters</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="E">E</span>-<span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="downloaded">downloaded</span>.<span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span></p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, I would be much grateful to be employed by you as a designer of consumer electronic products for your corporation which is posted in China Daily. I appreciate the opportunity of working in your firm with you and other colleagues. The experiences will be unforgettable throughout my life. To begin with, as a young man whose primary interest is in electronics, I find the job does fall in with my previous training and strength. I, therefore, decide to apply for the position. Moreover, I have ever accomplished some projects, such as the remote car in the National Undergraduate Electronic Design Contest. There are a resume and some other cover letters in the E-mail to be downloaded. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours Sincerely(加逗号) Li Ming(要在右下角) 点评：7分错误比较少，但是第一段不够简洁，尤其是第一段的后半部分，第二段的内容需要更加充实、明确一些。</p>
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