考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文批改9
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="Yesterday">Yesterday</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="message">message</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="XXuniversity">XXuniversity</span> <span word="majored">majored</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Literature">Literature</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span>.<span word="Besides">Besides</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="monthes">monthes</span>.<span word="So">So</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="Ican">Ican</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>,<span word="Iam">Iam</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="competent">competent</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="LingMing">LingMing</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>, <span word="Yesterday">Yesterday</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="message">message</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="XXuniversity">XXuniversity</span>(<span word="u">u</span>大写，<span word="XX">XX</span> <span word="University">University</span>) <span word="majored">majored</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Literature">Literature</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="in">in</span>(去掉一个) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="monthes">monthes</span>(<span word="months">months</span>). <span word="So">So</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>, <span word="Iam">Iam</span>(<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span>或是<span word="Im">Im</span>) <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="competent">competent</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="LingMing">LingMing</span>(<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，下一行<span word="LiMing">LiMing</span>) 点评：7-8分言简意赅，条理分明。要注意细节上的问题。</p><p> </p>
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