考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改2
<p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="school">school</span>(<span word="in">in</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="Department">Department</span>)<span word="of">of</span> <span word="Zhengzhou">Zhengzhou</span> <span word="university">university</span>(<span word="u">u</span>大写). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convey">convey</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="position">position</span>(<span word="advertised">advertised</span>修饰的<span word="position">position</span>，所以他们不能离得太远，改成<span word="position">position</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Secretary">Secretary</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="make">make</span>(<span word="makes">makes</span>，主语是<span word="experience">experience</span>)<span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="post">post</span> .<span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span>(应该用过去式<span word="graduated">graduated</span>)<span word="from">from</span> <span word="zhengzhou">zhengzhou</span> <span word="university">university</span>(首字母要大写) <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bachelors">bachelors</span>(<span word="bachelors">bachelors</span>) <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="union">union</span>(<span word="student">student</span> <span word="union">union</span>) <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="organization">organization</span> <span word="capability">capability</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="In">In</span>(<span word="i">i</span>小写) <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="byworks">byworks</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="afterclass">afterclass</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="vacation">vacation</span>(<span word="after">after</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="vacation">vacation</span>)<span word="during">during</span> <span word="at">at</span>(去掉一个介词)<span word="the">the</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="firendly">firendly</span>(拼写错误，<span word="friendly">friendly</span>) <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="working">working</span>(情态动词后用动词原形<span word="work">work</span>) <span word="with">with</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="english">english</span>(<span word="English">English</span>) <span word="fluently">fluently</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="familiarity">familiarity</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="soft">soft</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="passed">passed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exam">exam</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="english">english</span>(<span word="English">English</span>) <span word="test">test</span> <span word="band">band</span> 4 <span word="and">and</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="band">band</span> 4.</p>
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