考研英语看作文范例点评：因材施教
<p> 2015考研英语看图作文范例点评：因材施教</p><p> 写作原文</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="duck">duck</span> <span word="mother">mother</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="anxious">anxious</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="energetic">energetic</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="begging">begging</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="monkey">monkey</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="approach">approach</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="climbing">climbing</span> <span word="tree">tree</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fright">fright</span>. <span word="Conspicuously">Conspicuously</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="deliciousironicdepiction">deliciousironicdepiction</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="blind">blind</span> <span word="education">education</span>,<span word="a">a</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="pervasive">pervasive</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="society">society</span>.<span word="This">This</span> <span word="overwhelming">overwhelming</span>, <span word="occupy">occupy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="irrational">irrational</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="ledus">ledus</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="conclude">conclude</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="blind">blind</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="devastation">devastation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="faculties">faculties</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="aimless">aimless</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="domestic">domestic</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>, <span word="by">by</span>, <span word="unfortunately">unfortunately</span>, <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="exert">exert</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="burdened">burdened</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="shoulder">shoulder</span>. <span word="More">More</span> <span word="ridiculously">ridiculously</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="countless">countless</span> <span word="flaws">flaws</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="consist">consist</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="litter">litter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="upsetting">upsetting</span> <span word="parallels">parallels</span> <span word="today">today</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="wave">wave</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="force">force</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="out">out</span>-<span word="class">class</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="their">their</span> <span word="vulnerable">vulnerable</span> <span word="heart">heart</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="occupied">occupied</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="depression">depression</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="anxious">anxious</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="message">message</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>,<span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="created">created</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="kid">kid</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="freely">freely</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="us">us</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authorities">authorities</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="charge">charge</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="obligation">obligation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fashioning">fashioning</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="entails">entails</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="numerous">numerous</span> <span word="disciplines">disciplines</span>. <span word="Rather">Rather</span>, <span word="making">making</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="display">display</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="timely">timely</span> <span word="adjustment">adjustment</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="substantial">substantial</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="crisis">crisis</span>.</p>
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