考研英语看作文范例点评：水资源危机
<p> 2015考研英语看图作文范例点评：水资源危机</p><p> 写作原文</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="thought">thought</span>-<span word="provoking">provoking</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>!<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> ,<span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="bowls">bowls</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span> <span word="running">running</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="death">death</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="urgently">urgently</span> <span word="hoping">hoping</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="water">water</span> ,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="death">death</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="weak">weak</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="lacking">lacking</span> <span word="watertoo">watertoo</span> .<span word="Undoubtly">Undoubtly</span> ,<span word="we">we</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="konw">konw</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="humanity">humanity</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="zhe">zhe</span> <span word="moder">moder</span> <span word="society">society</span> .<span word="Indeed">Indeed</span> ,<span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earth">earth</span> ,<span word="there">there</span> <span word="exist">exist</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="water">water</span> ,<span word="including">including</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span> ,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="sea">sea</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earth">earth</span> ,<span word="bue">bue</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="shortage">shortage</span> ,<span word="why">why</span> ? <span word="On">On</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> ,<span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="notmake">notmake</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earth">earth</span> ,<span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sea">sea</span> .<span word="On">On</span> <span word="another">another</span> ,<span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="developmeng">developmeng</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="society">society</span> ,<span word="people">people</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="promote">promote</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> .<span word="And">And</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="all">all</span> ,<span word="people">people</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> .<span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ease">ease</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> ,<span word="various">various</span> <span word="steps">steps</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="adapted">adapted</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="everyong">everyong</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="shirk">shirk</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="accountability">accountability</span> .<span word="Firstly">Firstly</span> ,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="relevang">relevang</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regulationgs">regulationgs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="water">water</span> .<span word="And">And</span> <span word="then">then</span> ,<span word="what">what</span> <span word="shuold">shuold</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> ,<span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="water">water</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="firmly">firmly</span> <span word="convinced">convinced</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="peopleefforts">peopleefforts</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="future">future</span> .</p><p> 总体点评</p><p> 考研英语作文的整体思路你已经基本掌握，但文中还存在个别简单的问题，比如：文中的单词拼写错误较多，这些错误可能是由于作者在电脑输入过程中造成的，以后应该注意，无论是手写版还是电子版，都应该保证单词的准确。其次，建议作者加强语句组织能力，多积累并模仿经典语句，不断提高自己的写作能力。建议作者在写作完之后花费几分钟时间来回读文章，这样便会减少不必要的错误。</p>
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