考研英语看作文范例点评：本分变“承诺”
<p> 2015考研英语看图作文范例点评：本分变承诺</p><p> 写作原文</p><p> <span word="AS">AS</span> <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="above">above</span>,<span word="a">a</span> <span word="funny">funny</span> <span word="hen">hen</span> <span word="claimed">claimed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="eggs">eggs</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="edge">edge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="fundamntional">fundamntional</span>.<span word="Simple">Simple</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="drawing">drawing</span> <span word="is">is</span> ,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="symbolic">symbolic</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="ti">ti</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="deep">deep</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="oceanThe">oceanThe</span> <span word="honest">honest</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span>,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="indepensible">indepensible</span>.<span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="proverb">proverb</span> <span word="says">says</span>.<span word="Honest">Honest</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="gold">gold</span>.<span word="However">However</span>,<span word="in">in</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="China">China</span>,<span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="that">that</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="problum">problum</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="opposite">opposite</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pormise">pormise</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attach">attach</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gold">gold</span>.<span word="Individuals">Individuals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="money">money</span>,<span word="take">take</span> <span word="porfits">porfits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="obtain">obtain</span> <span word="wealth">wealth</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="promise">promise</span>.<span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="honest">honest</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="added">added</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>,<span word="giving">giving</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="world">world</span>.<span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="Acadmyof">Acadmyof</span> <span word="Science">Science</span>,<span word="honest">honest</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="relieve">relieve</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="anxiety">anxiety</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="problumsas">problumsas</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>,<span word="stress">stress</span>,<span word="isolation">isolation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="solitudeAll">solitudeAll</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span>,<span word="obtainthe">obtainthe</span> <span word="promise">promise</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="unhonest">unhonest</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="complexity">complexity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>,<span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="treat">treat</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="socially">socially</span>,<span word="economically">economically</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="culturally">culturally</span>.<span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="law">law</span>,<span word="an">an</span> <span word="up">up</span>-<span word="to">to</span>-<span word="date">date</span> <span word="solution">solution</span>,<span word="a">a</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="alert">alert</span> <span word="public">public</span>,<span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problum">problum</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span>.</p><p> 总体点评</p><p> 作文能够按照写作要求来写，写作格式基本符合要求。但是文中的问题较多，比如：单词的拼写问题、语法问题、句子的逻辑关系问题等。希望作者在后面的复习中，先不要急于写文章，从基本的入手，先积累词汇、学习基本语法、积累并模仿高分语言佳句;将重点放在语句模仿上，有空多读外文期刊，了解英语的地道表达，从而不断提高自己的写作水平。建议作者将每周的时间做一个合理的规划，一周练习一篇作文即可，在练习这篇作文时，可先积累此方面的词汇，之后两天可查找有关方面的经典表达及例文，然后再模仿佳句，等这些都做到位时，再组织文章。</p>
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