考研英语看作文范例点评：拔苗助长
<p> 2015考研英语看图作文范例点评：拔苗助长</p><p> 写作原文</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="vividly">vividly</span> <span word="unfolded">unfolded</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="caricature">caricature</span>,<span word="A">A</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="boy">boy</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="finish">finish</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mass">mass</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="height">height</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="father">father</span>,<span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="facial">facial</span> <span word="expression">expression</span> <span word="implies">implies</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="unwilling">unwilling</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="distressed">distressed</span>.<span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>,<span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="called">called</span> <span word="Early">Early</span>-<span word="MBA">MBA</span>.<span word="genarally">genarally</span>,<span word="It">It</span> <span word="isread">isread</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="adults">adults</span>.<span word="the">the</span> <span word="drawer">drawer</span> <span word="aims">aims</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reveal">reveal</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="symbolic">symbolic</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="according">according</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="aptitude">aptitude</span>,<span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="blind">blind</span> <span word="notion">notion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="society">society</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="cram">cram</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parentshas">parentshas</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="alarming">alarming</span> <span word="rate">rate</span>.<span word="Careful">Careful</span> <span word="deliberation">deliberation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="illustrated">illustrated</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="so">so</span>.<span word="Fierce">Fierce</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>,<span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>,<span word="constitues">constitues</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.<span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="sina">sina</span>,<span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="million">million</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pursue">pursue</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span>.<span word="Attending">Attending</span> <span word="cram">cram</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lay">lay</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="foundation">foundation</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="development">development</span>.<span word="Convergent">Convergent</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="breeding">breeding</span> <span word="ground">ground</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>.<span word="This">This</span> <span word="undesirable">undesirable</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="mood">mood</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="eventually">eventually</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="devoid">devoid</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span>.<span word="If">If</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="compelling">compelling</span> <span word="interference">interference</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="revease">revease</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>,<span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bound">bound</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="influenced">influenced</span> <span word="adversely">adversely</span>.<span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="specific">specific</span>,<span word="It">It</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="innovative">innovative</span> <span word="talent">talent</span>,<span word="be">be</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="motion">motion</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accelerate">accelerate</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="ultimately">ultimately</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="detrimental">detrimental</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="suststainabledevelopment">suststainabledevelopment</span> <span word="society">society</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>,<span word="Itis">Itis</span> <span word="urgent">urgent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="imperative">imperative</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="counter">counter</span> <span word="measures">measures</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="advocate">advocate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="propagandize">propagandize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="notion">notion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="divergent">divergent</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span>,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="conducive">conducive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="core">core</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="power">power</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>,<span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="foster">foster</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="desirable">desirable</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="philosophy">philosophy</span>.<span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="implement">implement</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="promising">promising</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="guaranteed">guaranteed</span>.</p>
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