考研英语看作文范例点评：充电学习
<p> 2015考研英语看图作文范例点评：充电学习</p><p> 写作原文</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="cartoons">cartoons</span> <span word="vividly">vividly</span> <span word="demonstrate">demonstrate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ubiquitous">ubiquitous</span> <span word="scenario">scenario</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>: <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="miscellanelous">miscellanelous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="programs">programs</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="majority">majority</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="smile">smile</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="faces">faces</span>, <span word="swarm">swarm</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="classes">classes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lectures">lectures</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="WTO">WTO</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="conveyed">conveyed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="drawings">drawings</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="inspiring">inspiring</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="illuminating">illuminating</span>.<span word="What">What</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="mushrooming">mushrooming</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span>? <span word="Several">Several</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="analyzed">analyzed</span> <span word="below">below</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="equip">equip</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="deeper">deeper</span> <span word="comprehending">comprehending</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="head">head</span> <span word="for">for</span>. <span word="First">First</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="first">first</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rapid">rapid</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="accompanied">accompanied</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="corresponding">corresponding</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fierce">fierce</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="lectures">lectures</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="careers">careers</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desire">desire</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="abreast">abreast</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="constant">constant</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="stimulates">stimulates</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="endeavor">endeavor</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="majors">majors</span>, <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="subjecting">subjecting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="challenges">challenges</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="minds">minds</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desire">desire</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="signifies">signifies</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="individuality">individuality</span>.<span word="From">From</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="above">above</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="safely">safely</span> <span word="conclude">conclude</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survive">survive</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="harsh">harsh</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="persist">persist</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidates">candidates</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="promising">promising</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p> 总体点评</p><p> 整体来说，文章写得不错;但还存在个别简单的语法错误。作者在写作完之后若可以花费几分钟时间来回读文章，便会减少不必要的错误。考研作文的整体思路你已经基本掌握，后面要做的就是多积累高分佳句，为自己的文章增彩;再者，写完之后一定要认真检查，减少失分点。</p>
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