考研英语作文经典范文身体健康类一
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>:</p><p> <span word="Study">Study</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> 120 <span word="words">words</span>.</p><p> <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="ANSWER">ANSWER</span> <span word="SHEET">SHEET</span> 2.</p><p> <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="cover">cover</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="below">below</span>:</p><p> 1. <span word="Interpret">Interpret</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span>.</p><p> 2. <span word="Predict">Predict</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tobacco">tobacco</span> <span word="consumption">consumption</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> 真题分析：</p><p> 这是典型的图表+提纲式的命题，题目中提供的材料十分丰富，包括柱状图、饼状图以及其他相关数据。组图充分反映了当代烟草消费的规模、危害和趋势，是人们普遍关心的热点话题之一。通过对组图的分析，我们可以看出烟草在全世界有着十分庞大的消费群体规模，每年因为烟草消费消耗的资金数额大得惊人，同时也有数以百万计的人由于烟草消费而被夺去了生命。当然，我们从图中也可以发现一个令人欣喜的趋势，那就是烟草的总产量在近几年呈下降的态势，一定程度上说明了烟草消费引起的健康问题开始得到了人们的重视，并出现了相关的解决措施。</p><p> 本题的难点在于图表给的信息量太大，考生如何最恰当地在全文中使用数据将决定文章的质量。如果一味将所有数据都堆在第一段，会造成第一段过于冗长，全文头重脚轻。在下面的范文中，图表数字得到了灵活的运用，比较得体。比如文章在一开始先用烟民人数占全世界人数的比例来说明了烟草消费的巨大规模，然后又通过该行业消耗的人民财产和生命进一步说明产业之大、对人类危害之重。而至于第一幅图中关于烟草产量的数字则被用到了第二段中来说明未来的趋势，非常得体、恰当。</p>
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