考研英语作文批改范例6
<p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>, <span word="It">It</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="meets">meets</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follows">follows</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="such">such</span> （<span word="such">such</span> <span word="an">an</span>）<span word="ambitious">ambitious</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enter">enter</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="distance">distance</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shortest">shortest</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="route">route</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="monthly">monthly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="although">although</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="candidates">candidates</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="Hope">Hope</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> </p>
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