考研英语作文批改范例9
<p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>, <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="myself">myself</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="request">request</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="kindly">kindly</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="beneficiary">beneficiary</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Project">Project</span> <span word="Hope">Hope</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="criteria">criteria</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follows">follows</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quake">quake</span> <span word="zone">zone</span> （<span word="the">the</span> <span word="earthquake">earthquake</span>-<span word="stricken">stricken</span> <span word="area">area</span>）<span word="of">of</span> <span word="Sichuan">Sichuan</span> <span word="Province">Province</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="account">account</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="record">record</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="approve">approve</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="recipient">recipient</span> <span word="constantly">constantly</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="cover">cover</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="tuition">tuition</span> <span word="fee">fee</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="touch">touch</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="seek">seek</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="needed">needed</span>. <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="prompt">prompt</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="inquiry">inquiry</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="appreciated">appreciated</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> </p>
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